1. Nuclear Power
- Great Job establishing a background of nuclear power's history
- Almost spends to long trying to disprove other claims
- Cites very trustworthy sources to establish a clear problem
- Builds solid logos and ethos throughout the piece
- Nice flow, but almost blends together to much
2. Meal Plans
- Very concise and well organized
- Has a very creative and unique solution
- Is self aware of critiques of her plan and addresses them clearly
- Over justifies; seems to stretch out some aspects to much
- Could use a few more statistics to give herself more credit
3. Biodiversity
- Short, direct, and concise
- Follows the clear constructs of a proposal
- For the length, spends to much time on personal interest
- Doesn't spend a lot time on justifications
- Feels like lots is left out
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